From 51f9ec7fb17df0c89ecf00932ca98dfcc13738ab Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: p <grr@lo2.org>
Date: Sat, 25 Jan 2025 00:10:05 -0500
Subject: lingering mystery changes

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 tomb500000.tex | 34 +++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 file changed, 17 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

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diff --git a/tomb500000.tex b/tomb500000.tex
index 9e3f242..79f813d 100644
--- a/tomb500000.tex
+++ b/tomb500000.tex
@@ -103,29 +103,28 @@
 \null\vfill
 
 \noindent
-\parbox{2.5in}{\ttfamily \noindent ISBN 1-84068-062-8
+\parbox{2.5in}{\ttfamily \noindent \xout{ISBN 1-84068-062-8}
 
-\noindent English edition published 2003
+\noindent \textit{an} English edition \textit{was} published\\
+ 2003\hfill by Creation Books\\
 
-by Creation Books
-
-\uline{www.creationbooks.com} 
-\vskip 2em
-\sout{World English rights reserved}
+\uline{www.creationbooks.com} \\
+\xout{World English rights reserved}\\
+\vskip 1em
 
 \sout{\textcopyright\ Editions Gallimard 1968}
 }\parbox{1.4in}{\includegraphics[scale=0.5]{img/sal}}
 
-
-
-
-\vfill
+\vskip 1em
 
 { \noindent Translation \hfill \uline{\itshape{revised by:}} \\
 \textcopyright\ Romain Slocombe 2002 \hfill\itshape{Dan Urbanski}\\
-{ \null\hfill\itshape{Salitter Committee} \par}}
-{ \null\hfill\itshape{(chants -> songs \textbullet\ missing indentation \textbullet\ fixed spelling 
-\textbullet\ de-EdenEdenEden of punctuation \textbullet\ various \\ consistency fixes)} \par}
+{ \textit{(which is neat)}\hfill\itshape{Salitter Committee} \par}}
+\vskip 1em
+{ \noindent\itshape{(chants $\rightarrow$ songs \hfill\textbullet\hfill missing indentation \hfill\textbullet\hfill fixed \\
+spelling \hfill\textbullet\hfill make punctuation normal \hfill\textbullet\hfill various \\
+consistency fixes \hfill\textbullet\hfill brand new typography for dialogue)\\
+\null\hfill(patent pending)} \par}
 
 \vfill
 
@@ -135,7 +134,7 @@ by Creation Books
 
 {\noindent This book is published with the support of \hrulefill\null
 \vfill
-\noindent \sout{--- the French Ministry of Culture} \hfill \tld\tld\tld\itshape{brea} \varheartsuit\tld\tld\tld\\
+\noindent \sout{--- the French Ministry of Culture} \hfill \tld\tld\tld\itshape{brea} $\varheartsuit$\tld\tld\tld\\
 \sout{--- the French Ministry for Foreign} \hfill \itshape{ayla brooke derek}\\
 \sout{Affairs (as part of the Burgess} \hfill \itshape{ian ix kira --- \textbf{\uline{K} \uline{C} \uline{R} \uline{M}}}\\
 \sout{programme headed for the French} \hfill \itshape{\textbf{\uline{C}} --- World Food Books}\\
@@ -145,8 +144,9 @@ by Creation Books
 \vfill
 \null \hfill \itshape{thank u} \\
 \vfill
-\null\hfill \uline{\itshape{https://salitter.org}}\\
-\null\hfill \itshape{instagram @salitters}\\
+\noindent\itshape{august 2024}\hfill \uline{\itshape{https://salitter.org}}\\
+\itshape{providence, ri}\hfill \itshape{instagram @salitters}\\
+\itshape{madrid, spain}
 }}
 
 \vfill
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