From 9e3fe7621ba40b2a32924521db21d47e1be92e62 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: grr <grr@lo2.org>
Date: Sun, 7 Apr 2024 12:08:48 -0400
Subject: some corrections for linebreaking on speech

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 body.tex | 16 ++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

(limited to 'body.tex')

diff --git a/body.tex b/body.tex
index 087c406..a399ca4 100644
--- a/body.tex
+++ b/body.tex
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ crowded with males, animals, bundles, spitting black saliva, wasp-sting swelling
 half-closing eye, pockets crammed with black grapes : tanned head of old man, reddening under white
 hairs, shaking against sheet-metal, under gear-stick : with hobnail boots, driver, black saliva
 drying on chin, crushing, pulling immaculate locks from occiput, against metal beaten, from below,
-by cracked stones kicked back ; {\slash} at camp, soldier : {\gl} dogs! wash out my trucks {\gr} ;
+by cracked stones kicked back ; {\slash} at camp, soldier : {\gl}~dogs! wash out my trucks~{\gr} ;
 {\slash} females hanging out babies' rags on bushes ; {\slash} males setting up tents beside rubbish
 ditch : sludge of rotting meat, vomit, glimmering, rosy, under lifeless reeds bending ; soldiers
 pushing back, with butts of rifles, women laying babies down in tents ; kicking, punching haunches
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ scraping earth ; soldier's breath against girl's cheek sucking in, blowing out s
 shifting belly under grinding muscles of abdomen ; blinding --- nails, spit --- soldier's eyes ;
 soldier's secreting balls lying, cooling, on girl's thigh ; below palm-trees, RIMA squad dragging
 woman pulled unconscious from tent : blond soldier, forehead glowering, tears bathing eye-sockets
-glazed with charcoal, urine blocking jissom in glans, squeezing woman held in arms ; {\gl} screw
+glazed with charcoal, urine blocking jissom in glans, squeezing woman held in arms ; {\gl}~screw
 good ; fuck hard ; watch out for brass~{\gr}, %
 % 5
 hands, lips, stroking, licking woman's contorted face thrown back over blond soldier's arm
@@ -167,11 +167,11 @@ on breast, whining, bloody saliva drooling from dried lips, two threads dripping
 tearing off Peuhl's shirt, shirt thrown down at feet ; handkerchief in hand, thumb stroking, forcing
 Peuhl's lips, teeth : %
 % 8
-cadet's member stirring in pants {\ldots} {\gl} {\ldots} farting herdsman, dozing, loins stiffened
+cadet's member stirring in pants {\ldots} {\gl}~{\ldots}farting herdsman, dozing, loins stiffened
 from thrusting, pumping{\td} slender, running through drinn{\td} pimply mouth{\td}, hot bath,
 insecticide, tooth-comb never drawing out perfume of wool, of milk{\td} paste, potash, gonacrine on
 your lips, taste of venom sucked{\td} no encrusted dung of buggery on glans hardened by quivering
-tension of loins, bitter sweat of beasts squatting in salt{\ldots} {\gr}{\td} : Peuhl kissing
+tension of loins, bitter sweat of beasts squatting in salt{\ldots}~{\gr}{\td} : Peuhl kissing
 cadet's fingernails through muslin, nostrils detecting crease, whiff of dried jissom ; cadet
 dropping handkerchief, stroking Peuhl's bare shoulder, gathering, rolling member in palm of hand,
 groping inside pants, pulling, pressing testicles against folds of cloth ; Peuhl, flanks strained
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ water ; Peuhl stepping outside hut : nest of larks hissing, hooked under palm-aw
 nest, larks springing up, shitting over wrist ; squatting down, stretching out on straw kept for
 tortured prisoners, dozing, buttocks pulled apart by stiffened seam of dungarees ; lips, wet with
 spittle expelled by pulsating cheeks --- knees, hams, forehead trembling ---, touching blood-spots
-on pillow{\ldots} {\gl} {\ldots}drinking rebel's blood, drinking against tortured lips, tortured
+on pillow{\ldots} {\gl}~{\ldots}drinking rebel's blood, drinking against tortured lips, tortured
 shins, holding blood in mouth, running through fields of blackcurrants blazing, flooded with venom,
 wrist chafed by sickle-charm tied to chain, running to meadow with fishes leaping, outside
 slave-camp ; over hill, spitting blood into onyx basin ; other slaves, scalps caked with dung,
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@ bed of poisoned straw : head, shoulders buried beneath Mother's dress, eating fr
 fritters over hardened vulva : Mother sleeping, tired by journey in cargo hold, tipper-trucks ;
 escaping at dawn, slipping from under my body ; caught by soldiers under tower --- me watching,
 ejaculating --- pushed back onto sand by goading knees, wasp hovering at right breast, over lips of
-soldiers sucking at teat{\ldots} {\gr}{\td} ; {\slash} pressed against kennel fencing, soldier
+soldiers sucking at teat{\ldots}~{\gr}{\td} ; {\slash} pressed against kennel fencing, soldier
 rolling, covering girl ; cadet squatting down, lifting up soldier, gripping loins : member slipping
 out, soldier standing up, running off ; cadet blowing off straw gathered on small contracted body,
 lifting girl up in arms ; body dilating under breath, vapours, juices of cadet --- hugging girl,
@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ wrinkles --- under lintel closing off counter ; red-haired boy lying on belly in
 floor-cloths, buckets, brushes, pressing forehead, knees, against concrete, replenishing jissom ;
 goose stretched out beside boy, beak burrowing under armpit ; Wazzag lifting up goose holding neck,
 hand rubbing boy's nipple ; pulling bird out of box-room{\td} {\gl} just grabbing gobbler,
-Khamssieh, time for lame-duck to get good goosing{\td} {\gr} ; %
+Khamssieh, time for lame-duck to get good goosing{\td}~{\gr} ; %
 % 12
 goose squawking, Khamssieh rolling over onto back ; mottled member bouncing out between thighs,
 springing up erect ; tongue lolling over lips ; clot of jissom trembling in nostril, blown onto
@@ -287,7 +287,7 @@ alley, worker-youths, date-pickers, mechanics, lubricators, quarrelling over Kha
 against door-post, workers' hands reaching for dark tangle planted in wide milky body ; Wazzag
 squatting beside trap-door : platoon of soldiers back from South unbuttoned by girl-whores ; one
 soldier approaching : before seeing head, just catching curve of member projecting from dungarees,
-Wazzag : {\td}{\gl} Rico, my flower{\td} {\gr} : soldier stepping onto terrace, away from
+Wazzag : {\td}{\gl} Rico, my flower{\td}~{\gr} : soldier stepping onto terrace, away from
 girl-whores, scratching dirt between toes with moistened thumb, Wazzag kneeling, fresh scent of
 insect-seed rising from leafy limbs, flicking dust from mop of hair dirtied in fatigue-parties,
 bivouacs, soldier hugging Wazzag between two rows of %
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