many lil tweaks

1 files changed, 26 insertions, 24 deletions

diff --git a/part3.tex b/part3.tex
index 5e67cf2..fb6f89c 100644
--- a/part3.tex
+++ b/part3.tex
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ sub-machine gun, pressing light finger onto locked trigger, popping
 mouth {\col} shaved worker jumping, flopping into shit soiled by fists, 
 straightening up, belching, collapsing onto belly ; dog-master 
 crouching, touching sweaty back, lifting jeans, flies plunging into 
-layer of fresh shit --- hard crust uncapped {\coldash} dog-master spreading 
+layer of fresh shit --- hard crust uncapped {\dashcom} dog-master spreading 
 cloth over swarm, standing up, foot trampling on inert head, turning 
 head over, covered in sand, iris scintillating among crystals ; swollen 
 mouth lifting, opening layer of sand stuck to traces of shit {\col}
@@ -595,7 +595,7 @@ frizzy worker removing hand, enveloping heel of blond, heaving,
 holding heel tight {\col} sweat from hand bathing --- heated by erection 
 \crpage{118}
 --- tarred rope of espadrille ; blond worker's penis again hardening,
-curved over club-foot's scabby skull {\crpage} ejaculation opening mouth of 
+curved over club-foot's scabby skull {\col} ejaculation opening mouth of 
 frizzy worker buried in buttocks of blond ; relaxing legs resting 
 against legs of youth {\col} sweat, rapid, cooling on pale skin, finger 
 slipped under root of member, lifting ; rag stuck to arse ; throat 
@@ -734,7 +734,7 @@ feet of former under armpits of latter ; frizzy worker pressing arms
 over tarsus ; dark driller straddling blond, crouching, impaling arse 
 --- jeans pulled down to knees --- onto penis erect with violet blood 
 \crpage{122}
-of naked worker, falling backwards onto \hmm{wealed} trunk, slapping feet 
+of naked worker, falling backwards onto wealed trunk, slapping feet 
 onto Wazzag's thighs, searching for pectineus with flat of heel, 
 pressing ; Wazzag stirring ; sweaty wrists pulling at feet of blond ;
 club-foot leaning forward, arching loins ; frizzy worker flinging sand 
@@ -1303,7 +1303,7 @@ prelusive seed, of juices, driven up by contractions from clitoris, from
 belly, into gullet ; boy rolling nostrils swollen with snot over woman's 
 teeth, plunging nostrils, cheek-bones, ears, chin, into mouth,
 pressing all against snotty muzzle ; member sliding back into 
-\hmm{crackling cunt}, pubis, again hardened, grinding, releasing, grinding 
+crackling cunt, pubis, again hardened, grinding, releasing, grinding 
 bruised pelvis ; with surface of upper torso, spreading slimy swollen 
 breasts apart, jamming nipples under armpits, into curls --- sweat 
 streaming along hairs stiffened by stale sweat ; woman moaning, 
@@ -1375,7 +1375,7 @@ nails packed with bloody sand, spreading feet, moving forward on
 knees, between open legs, lifting legs under kneecaps, up against 
 hips ; member hardened, boy swinging down over sweating breasts, 
 woman's legs crossing over his dried haunches, over backs of knees, 
-\hmm{he stiffening whole body} over woman ; member curving back against 
+he stiffening whole body over woman ; member curving back against 
 closed cunt ; boy, with hand slipped under belly, fondling woman's 
 clitoris, smoothing penis between two fingers ; withdrawing hand,
 bringing hand back onto woman's lips, sliding balmy fingers under 
@@ -1383,7 +1383,7 @@ nostrils {\col} cunt half opening, spitting, opening {\col} glans pushing pollen
 inside ; under fingers of boy, lips, cheeks, of woman blooming,
 thighs thrown back ; penis sliding, melting into cunt ; boy panting {\col}
 in torso, heart forcing lung ; prismatic eyes filling with tears ; legs 
-vibrating, \hmm{pubis} held back ; between two fingers, pressing throat ;
+vibrating, pubis held back ; between two fingers, pressing throat ;
 drawing face aside, disgorging phlegm --- in mouth, saliva 
 circulating, tinted with blood ; dry lips squeezing closed ; woman 
 pressing palms against raised torso ; respiration slowing, woman 
@@ -1460,13 +1460,13 @@ other fingers between teeth, passing fingers over retracted tongue,
 reaching to back of palate, scraping saliva mixing sticky with droplet,
 pulling out fingers rubbing fingers on grimy throat ; grime flowing 
 powdery over pubescent torso ; spit-soaked thumb scraping dirt 
-from \hmm{poxy} cuticle under lower jaw, forcing ganglions under tonsils,
+from poxy cuticle under lower jaw, forcing ganglions under tonsils,
 rolling grime from behind ear, from downy nape ; standing straight,
 boy shaking, hopping, jumping, seizing pubic fleece flecked with 
 crab-lice, lifting one leg, feverish, falling back onto haunches flecked 
 with pus, with blood, drawing leg back over opposite thigh, jamming 
 horny foot under sexual cluster ; knee, strained, glimmering, blood 
-\hmm{violaceous} ; heel lifting sexual cluster {\col} hand holding penis down over 
+violaceous ; heel lifting sexual cluster {\col} hand holding penis down over 
 thigh ; on heel, balls spreading, pores scintillating ; chipped 
 \crpage{143}
 thumbnail scratching balls, along veinlets, lifting bitter sweat to lips ; boy, 
@@ -1478,7 +1478,7 @@ thighs tense, abdomen hardening, boy diving forward onto acheb ;
 boy sliding sandy head under creeping ivy, cutting roots with teeth, 
 crawling --- back, croup, loins flattened --- under cool, bristling, 
 bitter, grasses, stopping ; muscles of abdomen, bones of 
-\hmm{epigastrium} forcing, grinding rancid sand underneath ; top layer of 
+epigastrium forcing, grinding rancid sand underneath ; top layer of 
 sand removed, musty stench, raised dust disintegrating zephyr, fire, 
 around body palpitating immaculate under ivy cut back ; woman, 
 rolled back onto belly, crawling out of patch of white sand, hitching 
@@ -1496,7 +1496,7 @@ moistened fingers, syphilitic spots burst over vertebral throat ; glans
 touching, retracting, against closed cunt ; knees, crowned with 
 beaten blood, vibrating ; baby, dozing, hissing, purring, buried in 
 warm coat of camel's neck ; grasses crackling ; flock of goats 
-assailing \hmm{tahla}, sidling against trunk, browsing on thorns, berries, 
+assailing tahla, sidling against trunk, browsing on thorns, berries, 
 flowers spattered with shit by drunken gangas --- driven from tree, 
 disgorging, swooping down over grass, iris veiled ; monkey crossing 
 feverish black hands over akli's forehead, raising eyes, scrutinizing 
@@ -1504,7 +1504,7 @@ prismatic stratosphere ; tail curling around akli's poxy throat ; eyes
 scintillating between flecked lashes ; singed muzzle throbbing ; fire 
 reddening ruffled coat ; blood flowing from akli's frozen head, 
 \crpage{144}
-\hmm{susurrating} at corner of lips ; monkey wiping blood on fingers,
+susurrating at corner of lips ; monkey wiping blood on fingers,
 standing, walking, swinging hairy, over turf gorged with sweat, with 
 steam expelled from swooning body, stopping on white sand, sitting 
 beside dishevelled heads, slipping bloody hand between faces held 
@@ -1515,7 +1515,7 @@ beside akli, lifting fractured arm, caressing cold cuticle, wrapping
 blackened stump under palm {\col} mass of muscles, nerves, bones,
 flesh, immobilised in coagulated blood, weighing arm down into hand 
 ; resting arm on torso, pinching flaccid cuticle of neck, cheeks, hips,
-\hmm{epigastrium} ; throwing head back, moaning, holding out arm, hand 
+epigastrium ; throwing head back, moaning, holding out arm, hand 
 swinging, towards crouching woman ; breath making blood froth at 
 corner of lips ; boy throwing hand onto pulse detected in centre of 
 neck by monkey's finger ; finger of monkey's other hand touching 
@@ -1524,9 +1524,9 @@ advancing on knees, towards turf ; boy stepping aside, dropping
 penis ; woman stretching out arm, crouching, seizing arm of akli,
 lifting stiffened elbow to mouth, sniffing, licking transparent cuticle ;
 standing, running towards female camel, fists striking neck bringing 
-animal onto knees on torn \hmm{acheb} rummaging in saddle-pack, pulling 
+animal onto knees on torn acheb rummaging in saddle-pack, pulling 
 out painted leather bag, returning to swooning body, kneeling,
-pulling \hmm{decoction} of grass, of powdered teboureg, from bag,
+pulling decoction of grass, of powdered teboureg, from bag,
 smearing elbow, forearm, wrist, back of hand, shoulder, armpit,
 massaging greased arm ; monkey holding softened penis ; eyes 
 sealed to eyes of nomad, monkey squeezing shaft, with slight 
@@ -1549,7 +1549,7 @@ seated, knees joined, back to trunk, scrutinizing, through hair fallen
 over front of face, foaming cunt trampled by hoof of he-goat ; 
 shoulders drooping, eyes widened veiled by slow beating of lashes, 
 of lids, hands joined over kneecaps, penis proliferating at foot of 
-\hmm{wealed} trunk shaking, breath accelerated, modulated, by 
+wealed trunk shaking, breath accelerated, modulated, by 
 obscuration, by contraction of lungs ; new-born kids butting flanks, 
 boy grabbing scruffs, tucking kids into lap between lifted legs, 
 against belly ; soft hoofs touching curly pubis, erect penis ; laughter 
@@ -1557,7 +1557,7 @@ expelling drops of bloody saliva from mouth, at corner of lips,
 running in two threads over chin ; he-goat, haunches hugged, 
 trampling on sand ; shit-caked tuft of tail gagging woman's mouth ; 
 boy, standing --- kids falling at his feet {\dashcom} stroking belly sticky with 
-\hmm{meconium} ; tufts of young pink hair mixing with pubic fleece ; 
+meconium ; tufts of young pink hair mixing with pubic fleece ; 
 stretching arms, entwining ringlets, above head, around untouched 
 branch, bending branch down, covered with flowers, with fruit, into 
 tangled hair, over forehead, crossing legs --- heel of one leg, beaten 
@@ -1580,7 +1580,7 @@ drawing back, shaking head ; woman dropping branch ; boy rolling
 woman onto belly, sprawling on side ; crawling between goats, 
 grabbing swollen dugs ; goats, bucking, farting ; woman wiping, 
 laughing muffled, mouth of boy laughing loud ; nostrils aspiring, 
-puffing back musty smell of \hmm{tahla} ; stopping under belly of heaviest 
+puffing back musty smell of tahla ; stopping under belly of heaviest 
 she-goat, rolling onto backs, pressing, milking dug between their 
 fingers interlaced ; boy pointing dug towards mouth ; milk spurting 
 blue over nostrils, over eyes, pressing teat between lips, closing 
@@ -1616,7 +1616,7 @@ heavy hair, around wrists drained of blood {\col} penis, nerves aroused by
 cough, by lying stretched out on back, hardening arched ; woman 
 grabbing, smoothing dried serrated member against palm, between 
 fingers ; cough lifting torso under lips ; urine forcing root of erect 
-member ; \hmm{hoofs} striking flanks, climbing over shaken body ; dugs 
+member ; hoofs striking flanks, climbing over shaken body ; dugs 
 dragging over heated belly ; hair, horn, epidermis, eye, milk, blood, 
 sweat, urine, circulating from breath to breath ; shadows of flock 
 covering immaculate body --- woman, mouth filled with blood aspired 
@@ -1721,7 +1721,7 @@ against shit-spattered bark ; knees joined, necks extended, mouths
 kissing ; glans, released, touching spur of woman's hip ; torsos, filled 
 with blood, jissom, tears, grinding trunk down to sapwood ; he-goat 
 nibbling youth's tense ham, burying horns into fat of buttocks, 
-pushing, scrutinizing \hmm{rutilant} nipple bulging over bark, cunt --- loins 
+pushing, scrutinizing rutilant nipple bulging over bark, cunt --- loins 
 shifted --- rimmed with oily wet seed moistening bark around 
 constellation of russet roaches ; heaving, lips rolled back over frayed 
 bark, throats, breasts soaked with spit, right hands entwined, left 
@@ -1756,12 +1756,12 @@ squeezed under sweaty armpit, standing, long bistre hairs of occiput
 bristling, shaken over head ; trotting, lop-sided, ambling between 
 grasses, up to revived body of akli ; kneeling alongside, placing baby 
 in imprint of male camel's flank ; camel, tuft of hump shaking against 
-zephyr, trotting over \hmm{drinn}, mouth belching spittle, wheeze of love, 
+zephyr, trotting over drinn, mouth belching spittle, wheeze of love, 
 eyes scrutinizing immaculate rump of female looming, packs 
 removed, standing immobile amongst heaps of bundles, sacks, bags, 
 poles, canvas, skins, painted saddles ; muzzle skimming over drinn, 
 member, heavy, muscles loosened at root, beating against inside of 
-thighs ; nostrils sniffing at dusty \hmm{acheb} ; hoofs, digging softened into 
+thighs ; nostrils sniffing at dusty acheb ; hoofs, digging softened into 
 spongy sand ; hamstring of female twitching, blood surging in male's 
 lung, member pointing stiff ; female, buttocks bathed by breath of 
 male, sinking down, sprawling, flank flattened, onto unfolded canvas, 
@@ -1833,7 +1833,7 @@ in front of thicket {\col} vipers, sniffing air streaked by jet of phlegm,
 stirring, slithering towards clot glowing red ; boy rubbing heels into 
 sand ; woman leaning back against boy's legs, sliding head between 
 knees, palpating hams, stroking --- through sweaty cuticle --- 
-\hmm{popliteal} artery heating back of knee ; vipers sliding over intact 
+popliteal artery heating back of knee ; vipers sliding over intact 
 sand, dipping heads into clot ; horns stuck together, each lapping up, 
 aspiring part of clot {\col} boy's knees shuddering between woman's 
 fingers, eyelids hooding eyes ; vipers, clot lapped up, blood 
@@ -2357,7 +2357,7 @@ boy, penis drooping, pulling back blade, nibbling soiled point ; eyes
 closed, eyelid covering irritated iris, fist fondling woman's nape, 
 under heavy buttered hair ; fingers following interlacing tresses, 
 smile throbbing with undulating of final braiding ; woman's hand, 
-nails \hmm{farded} lustrous, covering, grabbing, fondling penis through 
+nails farded lustrous, covering, grabbing, fondling penis through 
 cloth, pinching, pricking glans with tip of nails ; boy purring, 
 moaning, whining, yelping, jumping back ; woman's fingers 
 squeezing member ; dagger pressed into fist against chest, boy 
@@ -2804,4 +2804,6 @@ bloody, member erect, eye scrutinizing Venus veiled in violet
 vapours, treading on beheaded vipers ; grease exuded from grass 
 bung, hardening ; vortex veering back to Venus, 
 
-\signoff{Vitry-sur-Seine, November 1968--April 1969.} 
+\plainbreak{3}
+
+\signoff{\emph{Vitry-sur-Seine, November 1968--April 1969.}}