last edenx3 stuff i did on laptop

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-{\slash} Soldiers, helmets cocked down, legs spread, trampling, muscles drawn back, over new-born
-babes swaddled in scarlet, violet shawls : babies falling from arms of women huddled on floors of
-G.M.C. trucks ; driver's free hand pushing back goat thrown forward into cab {\semislash} Ferkous
-pass, RIMA platoon crossing over track ; soldiers jumping out of trucks ; RIMA squad lying down on
-gravel, heads pressed against flint-pitted, thorn-studded tires, stripping off shirts in shadow of
-mudguards ; women rocking babies against breasts ; rocking movement stirring up scents sharpened
-with bonfire-sweat impregnating rags, hair, flesh : oil, cloves, henna, butter, indigo, black
-antimony --- in Ferkous valley, below breakwater heaped with charred cedars, barley, wheat,
-bee-hives, tombstones, drinks-stand, school, gaddous, fig-trees, mechtas, stone walls oozing
-spattered with brains, orchards blooming, palm-trees, swollen in fire, exploding : flowers, pollen,
-buds, grasses, paper, rags spotted with milk, with shit, with blood, fruit-peel, feathers, lifted,
-shaken, tossed from flame to flame in wind pulling up fire, from earth ; slumping soldiers
-straightening up, sniffing tarpaulin flaps, pressing tear-stained cheeks onto burning rails, rubbing
-members against dusty tires ; sucking in cheeks, drooling over painted wood ; truck-squad, down in
-dry river bed, cutting rhododendrons, milk from stalks mixing on knife-blades with blood of youths
-disembowelled in onyx-quarry against central vein ; soldiers cutting back, pulling up saplings,
-digging out roots with studded boots ; others kicking, swinging lopsided : camel-dung, grenades,
-eagle-carrion ; RIMA squad clambering into trucks, falling onto women, guns at sides, hardened %
-\crpage{2}
-members spurring violet rags clasped between women's thighs ; soldier, chest crushing baby sucking
-at breast, parting woman's hair pushed over eyes, stroking forehead with fingers covered in powdered
-onyx ; orgasm spurting saliva from mouth, dowsing baby's buttered scalp ; retracted member resting
-softening on shawls soaking up dye ; wind shaking trucks, sand whipping against axles, sheet-metal
-{\semislash} soldiers clambering into trucks : RIMA squad, leaning against tarpaulin pressed down on
+{\slash} Soldiers, helmets cocked down, legs spread, trampling, muscles drawn back, 
+    over new-born babes swaddled in scarlet, violet shawls 
+: babies falling from arms of women huddled on floors of G.M.C. trucks 
+; driver's free hand pushing back goat thrown forward into cab 
+{\semislash} Ferkous pass, RIMA platoon crossing over track 
+; soldiers jumping out of trucks 
+; RIMA squad lying down on gravel, heads pressed against flint-pitted, 
+    thorn-studded tires, stripping off shirts in shadow of mudguards 
+; women rocking babies against breasts 
+; rocking movement stirring up scents sharpened with bonfire-sweat impregnating rags, hair, flesh 
+: oil, cloves, henna, butter, indigo, black antimony 
+--- in Ferkous valley, below breakwater heaped with charred cedars, 
+    barley, wheat, bee-hives, tombstones, drinks-stand, school, gaddous, fig-trees, mechtas, 
+    stone walls oozing spattered with brains, orchards blooming, palm-trees, swollen in fire, 
+    exploding 
+: flowers, pollen, buds, grasses, paper, rags spotted with milk, with shit, with blood, fruit-peel, 
+    feathers, lifted, shaken, tossed from flame to flame in wind pulling up fire, from earth 
+; slumping soldiers straightening up, sniffing tarpaulin flaps, 
+    pressing tear-stained cheeks onto burning rails, rubbing members against dusty tires 
+; sucking in cheeks, drooling over painted wood 
+; truck-squad, down in dry river bed, cutting rhododendrons, milk from stalks mixing on 
+    knife-blades with blood of youths disembowelled in onyx-quarry against central vein 
+; soldiers cutting back, pulling up saplings, digging out roots with studded boots 
+; others kicking, swinging lopsided 
+: camel-dung, grenades, eagle-carrion 
+; RIMA squad clambering into trucks, falling onto women, guns at sides, hardened %
+    \crpage{2}
+    members spurring violet rags clasped between women's thighs 
+; soldier, chest crushing baby sucking at breast, parting woman's hair pushed over eyes, stroking 
+    forehead with fingers covered in powdered onyx 
+; orgasm spurting saliva from mouth, dowsing baby's buttered scalp 
+; retracted member resting softening on shawls soaking up dye 
+; wind shaking trucks, sand whipping against axles, sheet-metal
+{\semislash} soldiers clambering into trucks 
+: RIMA squad, leaning against tarpaulin pressed down on
 necks by driving rain, buttoning up ; eyes shining in darkening shadows, fingers glimmering on
 belt-buckles ; goats, sweat of pursuit around bonfires soaking coats, crouching down, licking rags
 tied around thighs of women ; silent youth wrapped in sackcloth, propped back against driver's seat,