odds n ends

3 files changed, 11 insertions, 7 deletions

diff --git a/edenx3.tex b/edenx3.tex
index b03f722..a582157 100644
--- a/edenx3.tex
+++ b/edenx3.tex
@@ -260,4 +260,7 @@ starting-point for new writing.
 \input{part2.tex}
 \input{part3.tex}
 
+% \backmatter
+% \input{glossary.tex}
+
 \end{document}
diff --git a/glossary.tex b/glossary.tex
index e31b4c8..2c3258a 100644
--- a/glossary.tex
+++ b/glossary.tex
@@ -1,10 +1,11 @@
-\deffor{Kba\"{\i}l}{
-
+\newcommand{\deffor}[2]{
+\textbf{#1} --- #2
+\vskip 1em
 }
 
-acheb
+\deffor{acheb}{i don't know.}
 
-akli 
+\deffor{akli}{}
 
 almouz 
 
diff --git a/part3.tex b/part3.tex
index fb6f89c..97928c6 100644
--- a/part3.tex
+++ b/part3.tex
@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ top ringlets of hair sticking into nest of turds ; vomit flowing
 from mouth, onto foot-slab, sliding into hole, bordering nest of turds 
 ; driven back into nostrils squashed against foot-slab, Wazzag 
 suffocating ; feet, caught under door, sprayed by drillers with 
-deflected jet from tap, tied together --- sprinkled with Vim\texttrademark --- with 
+deflected jet from tap, tied together --- sprinkled with Vim\texttrademark\ --- with 
 spongy floor-cloths pulled off water-pipes ; Wazzag rising up 
 propped on elbows, wiping {\col} gluey ringlets on saltpetred wall, lips 
 soiled with scraps of regurgitated fat on intact foot-slab ; blond 
@@ -856,7 +856,7 @@ banknote, folding, wrapping note in shaved worker's bloody
 handkerchief ; hand, slipped under worker's groin --- hip of shaved 
 girl pressing palm {\dashcom} delving, in streaming sweat, into front pocket 
 of jeans ; against phalange, through slimy cloth, beaten member 
-heating, vibrating \col fingers pinching second note patched with Band-Aid\textregistered,
+heating, vibrating \col fingers pinching second note patched with Band-Aid\textsuperscript{\textregistered},
 pulling sticky pay-slip against girl's hip ; pimp taking, tucking 
 banknote under bandage, stuffing pay-slip into pocket, pulling slip 
 back out, unfolding, scrutinizing figures, letters, arising, climbing 
@@ -2281,7 +2281,7 @@ short pink spurts ; woman sniffing at pubic curls, boy closing thighs
 onto muzzle ; woman pulling back head, croup, from inside djellaba, 
 straightening up, kneeling on sheets of leather, taking ear-rings, 
 necklaces, rings, bangles, bracelets, pendants, from embossed 
-leather bag jammed into Shell\textregistered oil-drum cut off at level of spout ; 
+leather bag jammed into Shell\textsuperscript{\textregistered} oil-drum cut off at level of spout ; 
 upright, jewels clenched in fists, fists crossed over coccyx, pubis, 
 breasts thrust forward, woman rubbing against front of body --- 
 heated by colic --- of boy standing up, pressing her broadened