a few more pages, also outlining some punctuation patterns

2 files changed, 86 insertions, 103 deletions

diff --git a/body.tex b/body.tex
index 768a6d0..087c406 100644
--- a/body.tex
+++ b/body.tex
@@ -242,109 +242,82 @@ membranes ; {\twoslash} suspect revived in empty guard-room, cadet kneeling, unt
 mouth rosy in dawn fire, walking on terrace, legs bowed, fist buried inside pants ; leaning back
 against palm-trunk propped up by %
 % 11
-brownstone balustrade around terrace ; stiffening legs, pulling out 
-member ; rifle, loaders, clicking at loins, masturbating, helmet 
-pushed back over neck, jugular vein outlined in creases of throat, 
-tongue protruding from mouth ; two children squatting, defecating 
-against barbed wire ; soldier levelling projector-beam towards point 
-on horizon --- dawn fire looming ; woman from tents, breasts 
-swinging in patched silk, flowery silk sticking at pubis, haunches 
-slumped against barbed wire, fingers scraping shit between 
-children's buttocks, wiping fingers in sand ; red fist on white arm, 
-slipping between wire-mesh, touching sliver of ration-bread poking 
-from sand, intact ; soldier's rifle slipping from shoulder, barrel 
-knocking against projector chassis ; one breast springing out of silk 
-; member forcing soldier's fingers ; thumb of other hand, loosened 
-by accelerating movement of masturbation shaking, contracting 
-shoulder, milking-arm, jerking, touching trigger ; woman, throat 
-tiddled with bullets, collapsing, head, hair fading dead, rolling onto 
-shit-smeared wires ; jissom spurting, splashing boots, sheet-metal ; 
-between breasts, fresh blood bubbling in globular clot ; soldier 
-linking index-finger to trigger-thumb, squeezing member at root, 
-pressing jissom up towards violaceous glans, catching drops in 
-fingers : tepid, carried to lips ; children, faces, bellies, swollen 
-behind tears, heads muffled in heated rags, pressed against pubic 
-curls, sleeping, sobbing, thin bodies shaking, waking, crying --- 
-entrails cooling, {\slash}{\slash} Wazzag, wiping mouth smeared with egg, mint, 
-jissom, pulling damp leg from under whore-master's belly : master 
-asleep at right side of whore ; sheet clinging to loins, Wazzag rising 
-from bed ; naked, going down stairs ; ear-rings tinkling : lowering 
-forehead --- powdered jissom held in wrinkles --- under lintel closing 
-off counter ; red-haired boy lying on belly in box-room among floor- 
-Cloths, buckets, brushes, pressing forehead, knees, against 
-Concrete, replenishing jissom ; goose stretched out beside boy, beak 
-burrowing under armpit ; Wazzag lifting up goose holding neck, hand 
-rubbing boy's nipple ; pulling bird out of box-room{\td} {\gl} just grabbing 
-gobbler, Khamssieh, time for lame-duck to get good goosing{\td} {\gr} ; 
-goose squawking, Khamssieh rolling over onto back ; mottled % 12 
-member bouncing out between thighs, springing up erect ; tongue 
-lolling over lips ; clot of jissom trembling in nostril. blown onto 
-fingers, Khamssieh rolling onto side, burying clot between buttocks ; 
-jumble of rags piled against back wall, boy's fingers groping towards 
-drain linking box-room of boys' brothel with tile floor of women's : 
-blood mixed with jissom wetting fingers ; Wazzag throwing goose into 
-first latrine along passage leading to garden ; boy huddled in corner, 
-heavy torso squeezed into white singlet torn at nipples, rest of body 
-naked, right foot in bracelet : foot slipping on edge of toilet-hole, leg 
-held back, hands crossed under knee ; penis, uncircumcised, 
-dragging on soiled concrete ; Wazzag holding back goose by wings : 
-boy cowering in corner ; movement of long eyelashes startling 
-goose, beak opening ; Wazzag loosening grip, goose springing at 
-boy's throbbing neck ; boy, pulling up body along piping, grabbing 
-goose's neck : penis hardening, brushed by spur-claw, by plumage ; 
-boy burying goose's neck between thighs ; Wazzag stepping out into 
-garden, leverets jumping in cages, Wazzag offering penis, leverets 
-nibbling ; leaning back against tamarisk --- trunk tied with club-foot's 
-cast-off clothes ---, tying foliage torn from tree around arms, hands, 
-heel, spearing greenest sprig with violet tip of glans, hardened by 
-leverets' tiny teeth ; Wazzag jumping onto terrace of women's 
-brothel --- secreting balls, encrusted with dirt, slapping under 
-buttocks ; in alley, worker-youths, date-pickers, mechanics, 
-lubricators, quarrelling over Khamssieh leaning against door-post, 
-workers' hands reaching for dark tangle planted in wide milky body 
-; Wazzag squatting beside trap-door : platoon of soldiers back from 
-South unbuttoned by girl-whores ; one soldier approaching : before 
-seeing head, just catching curve of member projecting from 
-dungarees, Wazzag : ..{\gl} Rico, my flower. {\gr} : soldier stepping onto 
-terrace, away from girl-whores, scratching dirt between toes with 
-moistened thumb, Wazzag kneeling, fresh scent of insect-seed rising 
-from leafy limbs, flicking dust from mop of hair dirtied in fatigue- 
-parties, bivouacs, soldier hugging Wazzag between two rows of 
-sheets hung out under reddening fire ; below. in women's brothel, % 13 
-noisy soldier with shaved head, bluish at temples, diving at black girl- 
-whore --- thrown back against pink wooden stairs, crossing heels 
-around soldier's ankles, over boots --- : English box of love-powder, 
-swapped in South for handful of sugar, slipping from soldier's 
-pocket, whore grabbing, opening box, sniffing powder ; black whore, 
-loins battered, blowing white powder between soldier's honeyed 
-teeth ; soldier spitting back powder onto whore's lips ; soldiers 
-pressing fists between women's breasts, pulling back, licking sweat 
-soaked up under thin cloth ; whores unbuttoning, one by one, 
-soldiers thrown back over thighs ; soldiers' members rising at contact 
-of fingers, palms, retracting under bracelets, rings ; pubic sweat 
-clouding coral, silver ; {\slash} shoulders hunched, Khamssieh tucking penis 
-between thighs ; workers, pressed against moist body of boy-whore, 
-caressing, slipping fingers under arched fundament, searching for 
-trapped penis ; Khamssieh, arms raised, crossed behind neck, 
-laughter exploding ; grease-smeared hand groping under buttocks ; 
-laughter shaking boy's shoulder touching cheek tipped sideways. {\gl}{\td} 
-first round for you, darling, come dip into soup you shot up my nose 
-this morning ; kept my meat fresh for you{\td} {\gr} ; lubricator, holding 
-rump of whore with one hand, other unbuttoning overalls, member 
-springing out, catching polished membrane of Khamssieh's secreting 
-balls, pushed back towards arse by pressure of thighs over penis : 
-member quivering, hardening, pubic hairs opening out ; Khamssieh 
-kissing mouth of black child hanging onto shoulders of date-picker, 
-lips smacking ; kissing cheeks, scarified throat, chest heaving under 
-half-open jacket ; child's hand holding pomegranate : trace of oil 
-gleaming mauve suspended in woolly hair ; Khamssieh sliding hand 
-under date-picker's armpit, groping at child's thigh, hand enveloping 
-member, secreting balls, through tight denim ; saliva filling child's 
-mouth ; Khamssieh kissing child, child pushing saliva between teeth 
-of whore : lubricator, flaps of unbuttoned denim jacket covering, 
-brushing over Khamssieh's hips in movement of erection, buggering 
-Khamssieh, sweaty chest sticking to boy's back {\slash} ; flight of sand- 
-larks swooping into alley, dancing over flock of sheep marked on % 14 
+brownstone balustrade around terrace ; stiffening legs, pulling out member ; rifle, loaders,
+clicking at loins, masturbating, helmet pushed back over neck, jugular vein outlined in creases of
+throat, tongue protruding from mouth ; two children squatting, defecating against barbed wire ;
+soldier levelling projector-beam towards point on horizon --- dawn fire looming ; woman from tents,
+breasts swinging in patched silk, flowery silk sticking at pubis, haunches slumped against barbed
+wire, fingers scraping shit between children's buttocks, wiping fingers in sand ; red fist on white
+arm, slipping between wire-mesh, touching sliver of ration-bread poking from sand, intact ;
+soldier's rifle slipping from shoulder, barrel knocking against projector chassis ; one breast
+springing out of silk ; member forcing soldier's fingers ; thumb of other hand, loosened by
+accelerating movement of masturbation shaking, contracting shoulder, milking-arm, jerking, touching
+trigger ; woman, throat riddled with bullets, collapsing, head, hair fading dead, rolling onto
+shit-smeared wires ; jissom spurting, splashing boots, sheet-metal ; between breasts, fresh blood
+bubbling in globular clot ; soldier linking index-finger to trigger-thumb, squeezing member at root,
+pressing jissom up towards violaceous glans, catching drops in fingers : tepid, carried to lips ;
+children, faces, bellies, swollen behind tears, heads muffled in heated rags, pressed against pubic
+curls, sleeping, sobbing, thin bodies shaking, waking, crying --- entrails cooling, {\twoslash}
+Wazzag, wiping mouth smeared with egg, mint, jissom, pulling damp leg from under whore-master's
+belly : master asleep at right side of whore ; sheet clinging to loins, Wazzag rising from bed ;
+naked, going down stairs ; ear-rings tinkling : lowering forehead --- powdered jissom held in
+wrinkles --- under lintel closing off counter ; red-haired boy lying on belly in box-room among
+floor-cloths, buckets, brushes, pressing forehead, knees, against concrete, replenishing jissom ;
+goose stretched out beside boy, beak burrowing under armpit ; Wazzag lifting up goose holding neck,
+hand rubbing boy's nipple ; pulling bird out of box-room{\td} {\gl} just grabbing gobbler,
+Khamssieh, time for lame-duck to get good goosing{\td} {\gr} ; %
+% 12
+goose squawking, Khamssieh rolling over onto back ; mottled member bouncing out between thighs,
+springing up erect ; tongue lolling over lips ; clot of jissom trembling in nostril, blown onto
+fingers, Khamssieh rolling onto side, burying clot between buttocks ; jumble of rags piled against
+back wall, boy's fingers groping towards drain linking box-room of boys' brothel with tile floor of
+women's : blood mixed with jissom wetting fingers ; Wazzag throwing goose into first latrine along
+passage leading to garden ; boy huddled in corner, heavy torso squeezed into white singlet torn at
+nipples, rest of body naked, right foot in bracelet : foot slipping on edge of toilet-hole, leg held
+back, hands crossed under knee ; penis, uncircumcised, dragging on soiled concrete ; Wazzag holding
+back goose by wings ; boy cowering in corner ; movement of long eyelashes startling goose, beak
+opening ; Wazzag loosening grip, goose springing at boy's throbbing neck ; boy, pulling up body
+along piping, grabbing goose's neck : penis hardening, brushed by spur-claw, by plumage ; boy
+burying goose's neck between thighs ; Wazzag stepping out into garden, leverets jumping in cages,
+Wazzag offering penis, leverets nibbling ; leaning back against tamarisk --- trunk tied with
+club-foot's cast-off clothes {\dashcom} tying foliage torn from tree around arms, hands, heel, spearing
+greenest sprig with violet tip of glans, hardened by leverets' tiny teeth ; Wazzag jumping onto
+terrace of women's brothel --- secreting balls, encrusted with dirt, slapping under buttocks ; in
+alley, worker-youths, date-pickers, mechanics, lubricators, quarrelling over Khamssieh leaning
+against door-post, workers' hands reaching for dark tangle planted in wide milky body ; Wazzag
+squatting beside trap-door : platoon of soldiers back from South unbuttoned by girl-whores ; one
+soldier approaching : before seeing head, just catching curve of member projecting from dungarees,
+Wazzag : {\td}{\gl} Rico, my flower{\td} {\gr} : soldier stepping onto terrace, away from
+girl-whores, scratching dirt between toes with moistened thumb, Wazzag kneeling, fresh scent of
+insect-seed rising from leafy limbs, flicking dust from mop of hair dirtied in fatigue-parties,
+bivouacs, soldier hugging Wazzag between two rows of %
+% 13
+sheets hung out under reddening fire ; below. in women's brothel, noisy soldier with shaved head,
+bluish at temples, diving at black girl-whore --- thrown back against pink wooden stairs, crossing
+heels around soldier's ankles, over boots {\dashcolon} English box of love-powder, swapped in South
+for handful of sugar, slipping from soldier's pocket, whore grabbing, opening box, sniffing powder ;
+black whore, loins battered, blowing white powder between soldier's honeyed teeth ; soldier spitting
+back powder onto whore's lips ; soldiers pressing fists between women's breasts, pulling back,
+licking sweat soaked up under thin cloth ; whores unbuttoning, one by one, soldiers thrown back over
+thighs ; soldiers' members rising at contact of fingers, palms, retracting under bracelets, rings ;
+pubic sweat clouding coral, silver {\semislash} shoulders hunched, Khamssieh tucking penis between
+thighs ; workers, pressed against moist body of boy-whore, caressing, slipping fingers under arched
+fundament, searching for trapped penis ; Khamssieh, arms raised, crossed behind neck, laughter
+exploding ; grease-smeared hand groping under buttocks ; laughter shaking boy's shoulder touching
+cheek tipped sideways{\td} {\gl}{\td}first round for you, darling, come dip into soup you shot up my
+nose this morning ; kept my meat fresh for you{\td}~{\gr} ; lubricator, holding rump of whore with
+one hand, other unbuttoning overalls, member springing out, catching polished membrane of
+Khamssieh's secreting balls, pushed back towards arse by pressure of thighs over penis ; member
+quivering, hardening, pubic hairs opening out ; Khamssieh kissing mouth of black child hanging onto
+shoulders of date-picker, lips smacking ; kissing cheeks, scarified throat, chest heaving under
+half-open jacket ; child's hand holding pomegranate ; trace of oil gleaming mauve suspended in
+woolly hair ; Khamssieh sliding hand under date-picker's armpit, groping at child's thigh, hand
+enveloping member, secreting balls, through tight denim ; saliva filling child's mouth ; Khamssieh
+kissing child, child pushing saliva between teeth of whore : lubricator, flaps of unbuttoned denim
+jacket covering, brushing over Khamssieh's hips in movement of erection, buggering Khamssieh, sweaty
+chest sticking to boy's back {\slashsemi} flight of sand-%
+% 14
+larks swooping into alley, dancing over flock of sheep marked on
 forehead, ochre, red ; shepherds, poxy, resting --- animals shitting 
 ---, slow watery gaze fixed on bars of women's brothel : free whores 
 smiling at shepherds, foam shining on swollen lips, uncovering 
diff --git a/edenx3.tex b/edenx3.tex
index 66a696c..043f904 100644
--- a/edenx3.tex
+++ b/edenx3.tex
@@ -18,6 +18,16 @@
 \newcommand{\twoslash}{\slash\slash}
 \newcommand{\trislash}{\slash\slash\slash}
 
+% ; /
+\newcommand{\semislash}{; \slash}
+% TODO a slash and then a semicolon. i suspect this is a mistake, but making a code for it so i can keep
+% track of it.
+\newcommand{\slashsemi}{\slash\ ;}
+% --- :
+\newcommand{\dashcolon}{--- :}
+% ---,
+\newcommand{\dashcom}{---,}
+
 % open speech
 \newcommand{\gl}{
 	$\langledot$} % fdsymbol